domingo, abril 04, 2010

Pais del aliento apasionado


Tu aliento es mi aliento
Dijiste con la mirada empañada
Y me fui en busca de un país
Donde habitar los vahos
De la boca exhortante

Donde alojar la incitación
Del ánimo

Todavía sigo buscando
Ese territorio amueblado con sonrisas
Con cimientos de brazos y piernas
Enlazadas en ternura

El lugar exacto
Donde el alba
Y los ocasos
Pintan las paredes en pasteles
Suaves y vigorosos

Un territorio que dicen que no existe
Que es humo ficticio
Figurado en el deseo

Un enclave que yo sí sé donde está
Aquí
Entre tú y yo…

49 comentarios:

Sokito dijo...

Te descubro, recién empezado mi blog. Volveré porque atrapas.

Moony-A media luz dijo...

Jo... qué maravilla de poema. Es de esos que te hacen volver a él una y otra vez.

Y, me encanta ese final:
"Entre tú y yo..."

Me vuelven loca tus poemas románticos, que lo sepas :D

De la imagen, es que, no hay palabras.

Besito...

Franki dijo...

Poema delicado y sublime, realmente llegan al alma, pero en esta ocasión he quedado atrapado entre las formas de tan bella imagen. Te felicito
Un abrazo

Juan Carlos dijo...

Lleno de amor puro como el viento que trae la esperanza y la paz en alas de libertad.

Un gusto visitar tu blog. Saludos,

J.C.

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guauuuuu impresionante, dulce,apasionado,eterno,aliento de deseo... "entre tu y yo".mil abrazos te lleguen con ternura.

Miguel Schweiz dijo...

Sokito, ahora voy para ese lugar nuevo y misterioso el tuyo. Estaremos en contacto entonces para compartir nuestros seres.
Besos y bienvenida aquí y al mundo de los blogs

Ayyyyy Moony, no digo más… :)))
Besito…

Franki, creo que me he perdido tu última actualización, es que con estas fechas la gente se vuelve tan loca que todo lo habitual se llena de obstáculos. :)
Un abrazo

Juan Carlos, no sé qué decir ante palabras que dan alas en la comunicación.
Para mí también es un gusto visitarte en tus sueños azules en el mar.

Lieve… guauuuuuuuu a mí me ha dejado k.o. esos mil abrazos de ternura, otros mil para ti.

alma dijo...

Tienes toda la suerte del mundo por estar en ese territorio, en ese enclave.
Me alegra muhcisimo tu bienestar.

Besos!

Ayla dijo...

Hola Miguel amiguito!Que poema tan maravilloso como todos los que tú escribes.Sobretodo ese final entre
"tú y yo" con esa imagen tan sugerente un besito con todo mi cariño,

Ayla

Blanka dijo...

Ains Miguel!!! Que bonito, precioso… es para releerle varias veces, siempre se descubre algo en cada frase, la imagen preciosa un momento muy bien captado. Bonito enclave y más si lo has encontrado.
Un besazo guapetón!!

Extractos de alguna vez dijo...

mmmmm!!!

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Dana dijo...

¡Madre mía, Miguel!... Iba a decir: No has cambiado, ¡qué gusto leerte de nuevo!... pero tengo que decir que, este poema, es el más hermoso que te he leído...

¡Qué canto al amor!.

Lo leo y releo.

Un beso muy grande.

Miguel Schweiz dijo...

Todos Alma, no nos olvidemos nunca de ir detrás de ese territorio, nos vamos a tropezar con muchos poblados que nos gustan o nos disgustan, pero sabemos que estamos viviendo...
Besos!!

Aylita, es que nos hemos leído un montón :)))
Besos amiguita

Ays Blankita, ya sabes, andar y andar siempre se logra el encuentro con el instante mágico.
Besazos guapísima!!

mmmmm, Lola...
BBBBBBBSSSSSS

Tomaaaaaaaaaa, mi querida profe, uffffff. Pues yo insto desde aquì al que se acerque que lea esa imagen fantástica que has dejado en tu blog.
Un beso muy grande

Siab-MiprincesaAzul dijo...

Me encanta ver q sigues enamorado... d alegría regresar a los amigos y q estos siempre tengan ese suspiro de delicia q tanto atrapan...
Un beso ! ♥

Ayla dijo...

Hola Miguel amiguito!Tienes mal el correo te escribo y me lo devuelven
un besito con todo mi cariño,

Ayla

Anónimo dijo...

Impresionante Miguel, todo. Hacer una crítica con tus creaciones es prácticamente imposible, es tal la intensidad que no te permite sino quedarte absorta en esa intimidad, en ese encantamiento.

Besos

Costa dijo...

Bueno... el comentario anterior es mío. A ver si presto más atención, pero es que no dejas ;)

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